Jesse Owens
By: Nikki Shrestha
As a boy, he used to take on different jobs like delivering groceries,loaded freight cars, and worked at a shoe repair shop. During, that time period he had realized a passion for running. His athletic career began in his Junior High where he set a record for 6 feet in the high jump and leaping 22 feet 11 3/4 in the broad jump. Owens got more known after he attended East Technical High School in Cleveland, when he broke the world record of 9.4 seconds in the 100-yard dash. He worked many other jobs during college to support him and his young wife by being a night elevator operator, a waiter, he pumped gas, worked in library stacks, and served at the Ohio Statehouse. But none of those things got in the way of following his dreams. He set three world records in 45 minutes at Ann Arbor, Michigan in 1935.
Jesse Owens was an
American track and field athlete. He is known to be especially good at
sprints and long jumps. In 1936, he was participant in a summer
Olympics,where he won four gold medals: one for 100 meters, the 200
meters, the long jump, and as part of the 4x100 relay team. In that time Adolf Hitler was using the games to show the world popularity of the Nazi Germany. Hitler and his government was rooting for German athletes to dominate the games by many wins. Owens surprised many taking home four gold medals.It has been said that Hitler shook hands only with people that won from Germany. Olympic committee officials told Hitler that he has to greet every participant or none at all, but he later refused to shake Owens hands because he was annoyed on how much victory the American runner had got.
After Owens death, president Carter stated "Perhaps no athlete better symbolized the human struggle against
tyranny, poverty and racial bigotry. His personal triumphs as a
world-class athlete and record holder were the prelude to a career
devoted to helping others. His work with young athletes, as an
unofficial ambassador overseas, and a spokesman for freedom are a rich
legacy to his fellow Americans."
Nikki you have good info about him. I liked how you did a separate paragraph about what you think about him and how you ended with one of his quotes.
ReplyDeleteI like the quotes, especially the one from Carter. I would capitalize "president" before the quote, and in the very first sentence say Jesse Owens, instead of "he".
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ReplyDeleteSome of your paragraphs could have been broken up more such as the first one. The quotes were interesting and relevant so they fit in well.
ReplyDeleteLiked it good amount of infor
ReplyDeleteAs a boy, Jesse Owens used to take on different jobs...loading freight cars, and working at a shoe repair shop.
ReplyDeletesix feet in the high jump
Owens got more known after (CYWTB?)
show the world popularity of the Nazi Germany. (CYWTB?)
Hitler and his government were rooting
It has been said that Hitler (said by whom?)
After Owens' death, President Carter stated,
I think Jesse Owens was strong as an athlete and a person in general, because honestly just finding what your dream is and people trying to make you stop is the biggest obstacle in life.
don't need "I think" avoid using "you"
4 gold medals in 45 minutes. (Four)
As he also quotes, (As Owens himself once said?)
Nice job, good info and I like how you ended with a quote of his.
ReplyDeleteThe first sentence is kind of awkward as an introduction
ReplyDeletethere's a lot of great information in here, but the structure of the first paragraph is a little strange. I think it would help if you started by explaining who he is and why he's famous first before moving into the details of his life.
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